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He hadn’t been happy for a long, long time. He blamed his frustrations on every one else. He couldn’t wait to be on his own. Life held him back, and this tore him apart. He wanted to be free, but the time wasn’t right. Now he smiles… His time is his own time. Freedom made him happy to be his own man. He now looks back to where he did hate, But now it’s with memories that it wasn’t so bad. To be sure… he has regrets for an action or two, But all and all he’s happy with the view. He’s seen the world now as his own man. Now it’s time to wait and see what he will do. There are plenty of opportunities in this vast land. And try them all he will… so now I must say… Goodbye little sweetheart… Hello worldly man. Carol Eastman: Impress Me Small Poem 3: Motif Philosophical

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Date: 3/10/2014 6:06:00 AM
Very Wonderful write. Congrats on the win, carol
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Date: 3/10/2014 2:28:00 AM
Carol, awesome win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2014 5:00:00 PM
- A wonderful poem posted for Giorgio A.V. contest - "Impress me with a small poem III" - Congratulations on your win, Carol !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/21/2012 10:57:00 PM
Carol, Awesome work, I really enjoyed it. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/21/2012 8:48:00 PM
congrats Carol on an exciting win for this brilliant beauty on transformation theme luv.. so amazing and interesting work..luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Carol E. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:26:00 PM
this is nice, I have enjoyed it thanks for your sweet comments.. cory
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