Groves

shallow groves of my mind tepid waters break over and over hollow thought of you tonight a car crash in my life never was sober shallow groves all your lies insecurities swallowed whole i gave up when i ran when you wake up quite hungover want to stay in bed

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Skat A

Date: 1/24/2015 6:50:00 AM

Anthony, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:13:00 PM

Anthony, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2015 4:32:00 AM

- The new year is still "just a baby" .... I welcome you to P - Soup and wish you a beautiful and peaceful new year - Hope we can share many new poems this year, Anthony :) - You write very well - Have a great day - // Anne-Lise :)