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If you decide to dig up your lush green grass to Plant on my side, you~ Are more than welcome; Otherwise keep to your side And stop complaining.~ Always remember when it rains, it pours down on All God's creation. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 08-21-2012

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Date: 3/25/2014 8:11:00 PM
A hidden fence, nicely done. : )
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:44:00 AM
Good job!!!!!
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Date: 10/9/2012 10:59:00 PM
You got that right! Informative write here..I like it...
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Date: 9/25/2012 10:23:00 PM
Could I have missed this? I love it. Rain inspires growth! Lovely wite Ink.
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Date: 9/20/2012 3:22:00 PM
Well done Pace - is that your puppy on your avatar??
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Date: 9/20/2012 2:01:00 PM
Just wanted 2 thank u 4 da comment u left on my poem Beauy Fly i have so many more its just that im knew 2 this site n if u have any thing that i could b doing different feel free 2 let me know. in I really like this one simple n straight 2 the point. Check out my new poem i posted yesderday. thank
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Date: 9/18/2012 10:26:00 PM
Nice "free verse" write, my dear! Though these aren't haikus, I really enjoyed it, made me smile! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 9/14/2012 1:55:00 PM
pace, such heartfelt lines and images that really charm my world... captivating!..:) hugggs and more
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Date: 9/13/2012 2:15:00 PM
Are you buried together Pace? Nice to get those boundaries set and alleviate trouble before it starts! :) Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 9/11/2012 1:06:00 PM
Obviously married or too long shacking. Lol
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Date: 9/7/2012 12:52:00 AM
Amen Ink, can't say how much I couldn't agree with you more here! X Peace Ruby
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:32:00 AM
nice one :)
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Date: 9/3/2012 8:07:00 AM
so true.... wonderful write my friend. thanks for dropping by and your inspiring comments. have a wonderful day, always!!!! :)
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Date: 9/3/2012 1:10:00 AM
Excellent Pace in my humble opinion excellent xx
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Date: 8/30/2012 5:36:00 PM
I am looking at a new poet to the poetrysoup community in awe of the awesome work you have displayed here in such a short time! You never cease to amaze me. Keep thee old pen flowing, always, Lucinda aka Cindy :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:29:00 AM
Wow..such a beautiful comment of yours..I'm deeply honored and proud..thank you for your neverending support!!! hugs :)
Date: 8/30/2012 6:44:00 AM
Pace, these are awesome man! the message here shouts out loud.
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Harry always sir!!
Date: 8/29/2012 6:27:00 PM
Well said and well done!!! xoxo - Laila
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:27:00 AM
Hugs!!! Thank you dearly Laila!!
Date: 8/29/2012 11:39:00 AM
nicely ..
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM
Thank you for your visit Annie!!
Date: 8/29/2012 3:24:00 AM
You are really good at haiku poems. This was lovely - well done oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:26:00 AM
Always a pleasure Anne!!
Date: 8/28/2012 10:27:00 PM
Amazing set! After a rather gloomy day, reading this was refreshing!!! Thanks for the eye opener. <3 Always, Laura
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Laura always!! hugs
Date: 8/28/2012 10:39:00 AM
Wow!!! Great write, Pace. I love it.
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:25:00 AM
Thank you always Leonora!!
Date: 8/27/2012 8:47:00 PM
Great penning. What a way to leave a message...Grit and truth! Cynthia
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM
Thank you dearly Cynthia!!
Date: 8/27/2012 3:55:00 PM
eye soring, poping haiku here INK, the grass is always greener on the other side... lol a message well penned..... NO COMPLAINTS EVER with your work my friend.
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:24:00 AM
*Carma- not cream..sorry..lol
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Date: 8/31/2012 11:23:00 AM
Thank you sweet n sour cream!! Hugs
Date: 8/26/2012 9:52:00 PM
Haiku at its best! Lovely!
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Date: 8/27/2012 2:28:00 AM
Devondra glad to have you share with me...hope to see you again..keep writing!!
Date: 8/26/2012 7:48:00 PM
This is good and so true. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 8/27/2012 2:27:00 AM
Thank you Lucilla for sharing with me madam!!!
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