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Grinding Towards Salvation

My soul feels the hard rub of life so relentless, this flinty grinding as I cram through narrow passages, crawling on my hands and knees towards the salvation of your touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/2/2015 12:33:00 PM
OH MY! This is lovely, David. That last line is devastatingly beautiful.
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David Brown
Date: 2/2/2015 7:03:00 PM
Thank you, my kind and lovely friend, I so appreciate your feedback.
Date: 2/1/2015 10:03:00 PM
Excellent poem with great descriptive imagery! Thanks for sharing!
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David Brown
Date: 2/2/2015 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for the kind comments Laura

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