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Grim Leaker

Cruel words leak from your Mouth like tears – I lick them up Like a good lapdog 6/28/11 Received 10th place in "Pseudo-haiku-cuckoo-cuckhosis!" contest

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Date: 7/7/2011 3:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Susan. Lainie
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Susan in Chris's "Pseudo-Haiku" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:20:00 AM
What a very unique take this is, Susan! Really liked how you played around with "grim Reaper" and made it your own-- very striking metaphors you have here too-- congrats on your win :D
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Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 AM
Very nice Haiku...congrats Susan on your win.
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Date: 7/2/2011 9:58:00 PM
Congratulations, susan. Yours had a most clever last line!!
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:20:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of chris, susan
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Date: 7/2/2011 5:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2011 1:40:00 PM
Fantastic visual with wit and sarcasm, susan
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:52:00 AM
I positively enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Susan. I hope to be back again tomorrow to read some more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 11:15:00 PM
Great play on the Grim reaper words. Is this for Chris' contest? Gosh, I have no clue what to do!!
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:24:00 PM
vivid picture with these words Susan.. words can be so hurtful.. and so helpful when used correctly.. great piece luv..
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:00:00 PM
:D...this is my face right now
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Date: 6/28/2011 7:18:00 PM
Susan I like this poem....cuts deep in the heart....short and powerful.
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