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Grieving over Leaving

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Grieving over Leaving

I was ever thinking of you
So my guts I could renew

We were mentally intimate
Both were under love-climate

Your memory was significant
Sending in life positive current

Your liking was implied
When for love I applied

But, it was not a final reply
Openly you did not supply

We both were damn young
By both love song was sung

From me when you departed
By memories I was comforted

Gradually time punctually vanished
Remembrance never diminished

Your true love and affection healed
To God also I prayerfully appealed

When deep dejection I owned
Your absence I greatly atoned

If you were very, very near
You would have stopped tear

Everything is now too late
We got separated by fate.



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  1. Date: 9/15/2011 10:41:00 AM
    Hope and then loss so eloquently expressed in this sorrowful verse. I feel the pain too.

  1. Date: 9/13/2011 2:37:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading today MV. Love,Carol