Grieve

I never knew what would happen the sudden immobile tongue I sweat and cry hail Please forgive me but they leave a trail The warmth within my hands disappear Please forgive me I wish I knew what happened what this pitiful sinner did Please forgive me I did not know it would be this difficult I would crucify my love for you Please forgive me The hero within me has been broken The liquefied sack of me leaks Please forgive me I wonder if I really meant to just hurt myself within my love I've finally realized I've forced my love onto you. Let you choke. falter I wish I haven't making you live a fake book life.

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Anonymous Ah

Date: 2/27/2010 2:16:00 PM

Beautiful

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/26/2010 7:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Shiki. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/25/2010 1:02:00 PM

My congratulations on your win in the "Betrayal" contest. ...Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 12:57:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a wonderful write for a wonderful win from a wonderful poet.. enjoy this victory.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Elaine George

Date: 1/13/2010 3:01:00 AM

As Constance La France stated - this is very crative. Great writing, Shiki. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. lainie

Constance La France

Date: 1/10/2010 12:03:00 AM

A really creative form you have given us with your powerful poetry.. well done.... and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, One Night, is it a wish to be with my loved ones? Yes, that is the hidden meaning... I only find them down the winding road to the place of tears..