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Grief Unsayable

They scream a soundless soliloquy, skeletal sentinels contorted, once proud standards displaying jubilant banners. The tidal push rushes in, out, in, out about ashen bones, marking where moorings anchored before life swept away to sea. Copyright, November 25, 2017 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 12/2/2017 3:41:00 AM
I came to read first place and truly enjoyed your poem. I enjoyed it 3 times. It is worthy of multiple reads and first place. Congrats and all the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/30/2017 5:41:00 PM
Nicely done, Faye, your creativity outshines..Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/30/2017 3:02:00 PM
Grief is hard to express, but you did it with a capable pen, Faye. ~ Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/30/2017 2:51:00 PM
Congrats on your top win
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Date: 11/30/2017 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Faye with this potent masterpiece! xomo
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