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Grief

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Grief

Grief

Standing alone in a crowd
Why don’t they understand?
Your universe wrapped in a shroud
You hold out an arm, an empty hand

Why is the world still turning?
Your song running though your head
They don’t understand the yearning
Why did you leave, why are you dead?

The longing for who is no more
You don’t feel your tears in the rain
No one but you feels the sore
Where your heart can never be again

Lost and now alone, that’s the theme
Yet you see them on every street
You chase and wish and dream 
But it’s not them when you finally meet

26/09/ 2013
 



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  1. Date: 10/31/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Congratulations on this very fine write. thanks for sharing and for the visit to my page.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:14:00 PM
    nice win Mandy

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 8:25:00 AM
    the loss of a loved one the worse grief of all! I feel the pain! Congrats on your win, well done indeed!

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 1:46:00 PM
    Lonely! very lonely!!! Congrad's Mandy Thanks for stopping by my writing. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 12:41:00 PM
    congrads discribed perfectly.

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 4:30:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Mandy

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
    powerful write that reaches out and touches the reader...great poem, congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 5:33:00 PM
    Hi, mandy. it's good to see one of your poems. I don't see you as often as I'd like!! Congrats on this one.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 1:14:00 PM
    Heart wrenching Mandy, congrats on your win, loving hugs xxx

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 9:05:00 AM
    congrats Mandy,, amazing sentiment, so touching and could only be written, with a tender heart...

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 4:28:00 PM
    this is lovely Mandy, yet so sad,

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:27:00 AM
    Such is our world, mandy

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:10:00 PM
    You are so right Mandy,....Seren

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 2:51:00 PM
    - A very touching and deeply written poem - it is really well written. - grief is heavy to bear alone, my dear friend Mandy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)