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Grief

Grief Standing alone in a crowd Why don’t they understand? Your universe wrapped in a shroud You hold out an arm, an empty hand Why is the world still turning? Your song running though your head They don’t understand the yearning Why did you leave, why are you dead? The longing for who is no more You don’t feel your tears in the rain No one but you feels the sore Where your heart can never be again Lost and now alone, that’s the theme Yet you see them on every street You chase and wish and dream But it’s not them when you finally meet 26/09/ 2013

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Date: 10/31/2013 2:01:00 PM
Congratulations on this very fine write. thanks for sharing and for the visit to my page.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/4/2013 9:14:00 PM
nice win Mandy
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Date: 10/3/2013 8:25:00 AM
the loss of a loved one the worse grief of all! I feel the pain! Congrats on your win, well done indeed!
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Date: 10/2/2013 1:46:00 PM
Lonely! very lonely!!! Congrad's Mandy Thanks for stopping by my writing. Light & Love
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Date: 10/2/2013 12:41:00 PM
congrads discribed perfectly.
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:30:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Mandy
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Date: 10/1/2013 6:28:00 PM
powerful write that reaches out and touches the reader...great poem, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/1/2013 5:33:00 PM
Hi, mandy. it's good to see one of your poems. I don't see you as often as I'd like!! Congrats on this one.
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Date: 10/1/2013 9:05:00 AM
congrats Mandy,, amazing sentiment, so touching and could only be written, with a tender heart...
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Date: 9/28/2013 4:28:00 PM
this is lovely Mandy, yet so sad,
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Date: 9/27/2013 4:27:00 AM
Such is our world, mandy
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:10:00 PM
You are so right Mandy,....Seren
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Date: 9/26/2013 2:51:00 PM
- A very touching and deeply written poem - it is really well written. - grief is heavy to bear alone, my dear friend Mandy ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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