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Grief

There's nothing left to keep, Memories of love,joy or pain, I knew I loved you, Not ever now nor anymore, Nothing really matters, Anger infuse maddness, Tainted love poison my soul, Succumb tendon muscles are frozen, Untouchable demons, Unforgetable Moments, Get out of my sight, It's not as easy as that, Good night Miss misery, Good bye so long wicked lady. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ++++ Black Eyed Susan Contest Grief

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Date: 9/24/2013 7:30:00 PM
It is so hard saying goodbye to those we love. Yet, it is something that we must do, or it will eventually ruin our lives. Really great work, Morgan!...Thank you for the nice comments, as always!
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Date: 9/19/2013 10:47:00 AM
"great stuff..enjoyed reading this"
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/23/2013 11:40:00 PM
my humble thanks Jessica
Date: 9/18/2013 10:37:00 PM
Good job. I have to tell you though. Count your lines. Susan always asks for 14 lines or so. Just revise this and you can still win!
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Danesh Morgan
Date: 9/18/2013 11:59:00 PM
thank you Andrea. . just in the nick of time! i forgot about that completely. . .now its revised. . . thanks a million and if i win 1 st i.ll dedicated it to you. lols

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