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Grey Mottled Pastiche

A maze of tall ascending fingers pierce the sky Prominent and conceived as seeds In someone's fertile mind Crowded together packed in vertical line That overshadow the pavement below. Temples of finance and commerce Amassed in concrete and reflective glass As tiny moving dots like ants scurry and hurry below Metal boxes of all shapes and colours In the city like a river stop and flow. A array of stores billboards and eye catching signs Forming linear line The pavement wet with rain makes them shine. The hustle and bustle of traffic Horns And police sirens make a awful din But just normal and ignored by the residents and crowds That tread the pavement and reside within The collage of busy hectic city life For the lucky and affluent a shoppers paradise But for the homeless sleeping rough On the cold concrete Life is tough. Peter Dome.Copyright.2015. May.

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Date: 5/24/2015 4:33:00 PM
such stark intense imagery - thankfully here on the Island we do not see people sleeping rough but I have seen it in the Uk and it is a sorry sight to behold:-( Hugs Jan xx
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Peter Dome
Date: 5/25/2015 5:51:00 AM
Thank you Jan. countless thousands of people go unseen around the world. many living underground in sewers, and like in Vegas. storm drains. Police in some countries seek them out and kill them. even pouring gasoline. in and setting it alight. one young 9 year old girl was burned to death thank you. Pete.
Date: 5/24/2015 4:20:00 PM
Peter, well this has great imagery, However, life is tough never enough to make the world a better place to sleep. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 5/25/2015 5:54:00 AM
Hi Skat. so true my friend. life is tough, just got to make the most of it. I feel so lucky to have a roof over my head. and have enough wan so many people have nothing. Thank you so much for you're kindness and encouragement. best wishes. Pete.

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