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A party at the club, I'm out to get laid. Strippers hitting the pole to get the money I fade. I got a private booth with a waitress to serve, wearing a g-string set that compliments her curves. Like the mad hatter of Alice in Wonderland, Keeping a joker in my hat; is why I can hold down the house with the dollars that I'm playing. Cursing the streets after the clubs have closed, looking for the honeys out striking a pose; spotting the ones that will come out their clothes. Taking them home, the parties on; i got the fellows in the back drinking patron. Under a twilight roof just like at the astro dome. A monster truck parked in my yard with a big huge flag of me tipping my dobbs.

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Date: 3/12/2016 9:02:00 AM
Derrick, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2010 5:22:00 AM
ridiculously funny
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Date: 4/4/2010 11:35:00 PM
haha definitely sound like a rap song, like the alice in wonderland reference, but what do you mean by dobbs?
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