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Green Ring For the Holy King

encircling and methaphor enhancing every chosen door, door to be chosen moreover, with (winter green) as the clover, clover green covering, shows subtle truth to the winter scene, scene enhancing rich and (entrancing) new life to think upon, upon every living thing let his grace be the covering, may all and sundry bring, bring to the evergreen holly & ivy ring, life's transformed and wondering, wondering yet sundering cares and needless worrying, on what the morrow brings. brings him an answering today is my chosen theme, me for your cares to an end to bring.

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Date: 5/20/2012 9:42:00 PM
Back at you, with this piece Joe! May your joys be many and your woes be none! This is a beautiful piece to share with the reader, the "holly & Ivy ring"...surely a time when "life's transformed and wondering". The green is certainly a reminder of better days to come! Green is here now; good riddance to the snow..hehe Best wishes Joe! Love, Mikki
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:27:00 PM
Joe, Hi.. how are you? Stopping by to say HI! I also picked this poem to read again... only cause, green is my theme..this month... enjoying, this winter green image. A new life and gift that was praised that night... I can't wait for that promised end.. great poem..
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:33:00 PM
enjoyed you poem Joe, very creative piece of fine work.
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Date: 12/29/2010 2:02:00 PM
Such a good read Joe he is the reason for the season. Fill their hearts with love,joy and poetry.I want to thank you so much for your kind and caring comment.Have a wonderful and Happy New Year.Teresa
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Date: 12/22/2010 6:39:00 PM
Yes Joe, this is a very big metaphor,, still enjoyed the your poem.. Good luck if it is for a contest.. yes hi by the way,,, missed ya,..p.d.
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:50:00 PM
Hey, yes, great work, as Doris said here! I hope this does well in the contest, and yes, I saw soupmail from you. But I am in a rush and promise to study what you said in it about your poem later when I have more time. So dont' worry, I'll get back to you. Have a wonderful weekend. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/18/2010 8:40:00 AM
great work!!
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:56:00 PM
Still laughing about your comment on the Rain poem, Joe. Just a whimsical fantasy that came to me when I couldn't sleep, so stop shuddering. Nothing deep about it. You gave me a good laugh though. (I had help with the horse.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/16/2010 2:16:00 PM
A deeply spiritual view of the Christmas wreath, Joe. I hope you have entered this one in Dr. Ram's contest because it is unique and thought-provoking. I'm sure he'll like it as much as I do. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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