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Green Pavilions

What mystery lies Deep in pavilions green Draped in sunbeams bright

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/21/2013 7:25:00 AM

wow i'm sure glad i found this, amazing imagery ....

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/23/2009 9:38:00 PM

love what this fine poem gives the reader to carry-on with! imaginative and very creative! Audrey! CONGRATS! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/22/2009 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Audrey. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 12/21/2009 10:06:00 PM

Great Haiku, Audrey. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Love Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 12/21/2009 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations poem gone to 2nt round Audrey. A server error came up on your soup message. Your message " Merry Christmas" came thru, tho. Merry Christmas to you also, sincerely, Love, Moses

P Sheart

Date: 12/21/2009 8:27:00 AM

Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty

Brian Strand

Date: 12/21/2009 12:31:00 AM

Congrats on you first round contest success Audrey.Rgds Brian

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/20/2009 2:59:00 PM

Wonderful imagery with this haiku, Audrey :) Congrats on getting through the 1st round :) Wish you all the best

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/20/2009 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on moving to the next round with your wonderful haiku, Audrey! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 12/20/2009 9:38:00 AM

Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem Audrey >> James

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 10/24/2009 11:35:00 AM

great write! congratulations on the feature tthis week!

Sue Mason

Date: 10/24/2009 9:57:00 AM

For some reason my mind has gone to the Mayan ruins with this one ... smile ... a powerful little haiku here, Audrey. Just a suggestion: a question mark at the end would add even more mystery!! ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being featured this week at the Soup!!

Elaine George

Date: 10/22/2009 11:48:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku, Audrey. Thank you for sharing. Lainie

James Fraser

Date: 10/19/2009 10:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Audrey >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/18/2009 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Audrey. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 10/17/2009 11:02:00 AM

Terrific Haiku >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 12:12:00 PM

Another awesome write Audrey. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/7/2009 8:25:00 AM

Beautiful haiku! Just stopping by to thank you for your lovely comment! Warmest wishes. Love, shar

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/26/2009 3:29:00 PM

Audrey... You Are So Gifted... I Love This Poem... It takes me away to the deep Forest, where Sunbeams slant through the Tall Trees... Your Three Lines is A Mind-Fantasy-Escape... Like A Short Movie.... Going into my Fav's MoonBee

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/18/2009 4:25:00 PM

nice haiku Audry ..welcome back to the soup!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 7:32:00 AM

Very descriptive. Keep writing. Sara