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Green Mountain

Oh majestic peaks, standing so tall, the points never meager, uplifting like the beautiful dowager. ~*~ The greenery covers, like a flock of plovers, and a blanket of fibrous wicker, near the rocky slopes that flicker. ~*~ The sunlight is poking through, and a wall of clouds of suspended dew, a stand of conifers abridged, growing across the green mountain ridge. ~*~ Oh Green Mountain, so rich in seeds and nuts, like the early bakers torte, your cool mountain streams, cleanse thy body and make me gleam.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 12:21:00 AM
Love it,,, you did a great job writing this picture perfect poem ;}
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Date: 3/20/2012 2:01:00 PM
You can see the image at http://www.booksie.com/poetry/poetry/razorblade/green-mountain
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Date: 3/20/2012 10:18:00 AM
enjoyed this very much - sounds like a view in the pacific northwest.
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Richard Mcclellan
Date: 3/20/2012 1:58:00 PM
I was looking at a picture, it didn't give me the location, but I suspect it was Washington State or Oregon, or maybe even Ireland/Greenland Area... It is a beautiful picture. You can see it at Booksie.com/razorblade . The same poem is posted there but has the image with it. I can't do that here...
Date: 3/20/2012 10:16:00 AM
Richard, sounds like a great place to visit,, I have a dream to one day go and visit the green mountains in Vermont,, you have a very refreshing ending.. flows, with all my thought... have yourself a wonderful day,..pd
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Richard Mcclellan
Date: 3/20/2012 2:00:00 PM
Its a beautiful image. I did my best to paint it in words... Yes, it could even be Vermont... lol goto my Booksie.com/razorblade to see the image with the poem... Its does so much more justice to the poem I think. lol

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