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Green Light

I started penning this poem with the title 'The Hotspot' Then after the kisses, the touches, your warmth, our moment. ..... The title changed to 'I love' or 'I love you' We started off with a full moon "A bloody moon" you called it An orange moon, I called it And at the end of it all The moon was still full But this time, bright and wide Like our lives Am always thankful to have you in my life

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Hannington Mumo

Date: 4/6/2015 2:57:00 AM

An outstanding composition, laced with tearfully sweet emotions...

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:37:00 AM

"tearfully sweet emotions..." I like that. Thank you so much Mumo. Good day.

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/5/2015 2:03:00 AM

What a lovely celebration of your relationship, njeri. #7. Happy Easter, Viv x

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:36:00 AM

Thank you for your awesome comment Viv and for the 7. Good day.

Poesy Relish

Date: 4/5/2015 1:13:00 AM

wow.. loved it njeri... even though two people might have different perspectives on life, love surpasses those differences.. have a nice weekend friend... hugs, nad

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 4/9/2015 4:27:00 AM

Thank you for your awesome comment. Have a good day Nad.