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Green Haloed Glow

The nearly full moon's haloed glow Doesn't cast shadow on hedgerow For it's almost hidden by dark clouds Eerily peeks through leafless willow The night's darkness could be shroud Coat all eve's creatures in velvet proud All that eerie green glow_which frights Came out from behind thundercloud Dark night laced by cobalt and black Hinders my vision of few stars on track Leave the dark come to inside lights Avoid demoniac counterattack Sponsor:Craig Cornish Contest: Night-Dark_Black_Happy_Sad This one is somewhat of a interlocking Rubaiyat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/13/2013 11:43:00 PM
Yes I got the interlocking sense of this one Sara, I also enjoyed the counterpoints you presented of gloom and safety.."
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:24:00 PM
good one babe...dodge demoniac in the black...
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Date: 10/1/2012 11:40:00 AM
Excellent, very creepy Sara, enjoyed it!
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:14:00 PM
clever write, Sara - very spooky indeed
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:59:00 PM
WONDERFUL WORDS DEPICTING THEME OF CNTEST SARA .. A SURE CHART TOPPER FOR DRAMATIC IMAGERY LUV .. WINNING WISHES TO U ..
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Date: 9/28/2012 3:01:00 PM
Weee...a scarey one! Well done.! BG
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Date: 9/28/2012 7:01:00 AM
Ah, yes, a dark poem from you Sara...this might be the darkest you get, right? You did very excellent my friend! I really enjoyed this frightful poem, wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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