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Green Grass Green-- GLIMMER of dew on early dawn grass has a new beginning of GOLD sun-rays Green-- RAIN from a wisp of TEAL sky pounds on pane glass, Green-- BREEZE of cool crisp WHITE breath twisting and lacing, through bouts Green-- SAVORING the herbs evokes a sour LEMON YELLOW taste Green -– EMBRACES of nature, spring growth of nostalgic PURPLE Glimmer, Gold, Rain, Teal, Breeze, White, Savoring, Lemon Yellow, Embraces, Purple Dormant grass is first kissed by the glimmer of gold hued sunrise rays The sound of panging rain beats in my ears, turns double rainbows into teal bluegrass Breeze tightly weaves and curls through one another’s tendrils leaving a wisp of pure clean white scent Savoring sweetly tangy flavor of lemon yellow tender blades of grass among the foliage Autumn embraces nature’s colors of sunshine laced in purple flowers in summer Heavenly 10/31/2015 contest: Green sponsored by; Silent One

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Date: 3/14/2016 10:52:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/3/2016 5:48:00 AM
Heavenly indeed, Eve. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 3/2/2016 9:13:00 PM
Hi Eve, Wonderful imagery, congrats on your placement in the contest! Very well written piece!
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Date: 3/2/2016 5:43:00 PM
Hi Eve, Loved the poem. Congratulations on your win in this contest.
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Date: 3/2/2016 5:12:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in the 'Green' contest! Great poem. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/2/2016 3:25:00 PM
Eve, "Dormant grass is first kissed by the glimmer of gold hued sunrise rays", wow is that beautiful! Congrats on your placement! -luloo :)
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Date: 11/12/2015 6:58:00 AM
Heavenly indeed! Congratulations Eve.
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Date: 11/11/2015 9:08:00 PM
Eve excellent win!
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:45:00 PM
Excellent poem. Congratulations in your win.
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Date: 11/11/2015 2:37:00 PM
The grass was laden with dew this morn and soon it will be frost..Congrats on this green win..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2015 10:42:00 AM
Hi Eve,, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 11/11/2015 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve! Wonderful colors and the senses used to describe the grass. Wonderful. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:02:00 AM
Wonderfully done Eve. I too found this a challenging write, you have certainly done a great job, good luck, Laura.
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Laura Hay
Date: 11/12/2015 2:44:00 PM
Well done and congrats Eve, well deserved! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/5/2015 12:46:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your compliment. It was a very challenging right. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/2/2015 4:04:00 AM
This looks complicated, Eve. But the finished product is worth it. Lovely. 7. Soupmail. hugs!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/2/2015 8:00:00 AM
It was complicated, Kim, I struggled with it, but I had to give it a try just because.. now I need to do Silent Ones. Hugs Eve
Date: 11/1/2015 1:01:00 PM
Creative ideas for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/1/2015 4:57:00 PM
Thank you, Sara, for your awesome support. Hugs

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