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When green-eyed jealousy asserts her will and apologies flounder in her wake, promiscuity's no longer a thrill. You can’t avoid the acid tears that spill and beg for forgiveness, for pity’s sake, when green-eyed jealousy asserts her will. When subtle looks adopt an autumn chill and nights become impossible to take, promiscuity's no longer a thrill. Insults get exchanged with uncanny skill and your future happiness is at stake, when green-eyed jealousy asserts her will. If you find you need a drink or a pill and you're afraid your heart’s going to break, promiscuity's no longer a thrill. Accusing words get increasingly shrill, berating you for every past mistake. When green-eyed jealousy asserts her will, promiscuity's no longer a thrill. (Villanelle) 5/30/2015

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Date: 3/3/2018 9:09:00 AM
Awesome poem, Emile. So happy I am not a jealous person.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/3/2018 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Line, your visits are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 5/31/2015 7:23:00 AM
Wow! It is insightful that you say "green eyed jealousy asserts HER will" There are times when we become jealous, know we shouldn't be, but just can't seem to help ourselves.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/31/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Monterey, we are all slaves to our feelings. Emile.
Date: 5/30/2015 1:28:00 PM
Emile, your poem is beautifully penned, this is a difficult form and you did it to perfection 7, and you captured the essence of jealousy well, for me, I just keep away from such people, it is a total waste of time, here to write poetry that hopefully some will read and like, the ones that don't, don't matter
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/30/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Broken Wings, your visits are always welcome. Emile.

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