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Green door speaks

the green door speaks, the hinges squeak, candle large of yellow streaks, of black smoke oil of dreams, do enter there, my beauty rare, to see me enter yeah, the rough hewed table seems, to resurrect the scene, and love is in between, the table and the chairs, a shelter so serene... Don This Green door place is inner space, A darkened room of dreams, A place an state to meditate , To focus mind, to see, Be in another time an place, Where thoughts an dreams can be, A mental time surreal in space, Across the mystic sea

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  1. Date: 8/6/2013 5:51:00 PM
    awesome, I need to meditate more, as I used to. guess I'm too old to concentrate. I watched my older sister slit her wrist/ arm.. My Fireflies poem will tell the story ;}

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 5:56:00 PM
    I like the enchantment...visually serene across a mystic sea :)

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Fantastic write Don, That green door song, always had me wondering, now I know...Peter

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 7:06:00 PM
    And the candle burns bright As the star tailgates the flight Under the heavens all is right Under clouds of blue& white xxx

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:25:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery of love. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl