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Green Aura

With a green aura That surrounds this house of old Sits a spooky feel Lamppost out front casts shadows Working eeriness about A lone light is lit By candle in upstairs room Visible on street Helps create the dim green glow That permeates all around
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/26/2012 4:36:00 PM
an silent green comes in between, when you do cross the doorstep, the lampost leans, creaks quiet obscene, should i just take one more step, or depart from terrors sheen, of Russells 'Green Aura scene,' i'll take not one more step, between... thanks Russell Sivey.... Don
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Date: 8/26/2012 1:03:00 PM
I can just picture the spooky old house - love it
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Date: 8/26/2012 10:54:00 AM
nice description but the other one I just commented to was scarier!
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Date: 8/26/2012 7:39:00 AM
am lost in exquisite aura Russell luv.. a truly wonderful and viviud picture of suspense and beauty .. a treat to enjoy .. thankxx for my win in Autumn Colors.. have created something special for Autumn Splendor.. hope u enjoy..luv..
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Date: 8/26/2012 6:35:00 AM
Ghostly scene that you have painted with words..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2012 9:19:00 PM
Very descriptive double dose of tanka.
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