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I bake A cake One slice So nice Adore …. Want more Stuff face Disgrace! Feed on All gone Feel ill Take pill I moan And groan Constrain Abstain No bake Of cake 26th August 2015

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Judy Konos

Date: 1/1/2016 6:12:00 PM

WOW Again...this is a number won coming from you....again........loved it and I stopped by as could not recall if a footle was to rhyme but you certainly answered that question for me multi times over...many thanks

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2016 6:15:00 PM

Oh I love the footle form Judy in fact I think it was you who introduced me to this fun style:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2015 2:24:00 PM

Love cakes, let's bake :) xx James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 6:14:00 PM

I made scones today James - have written a tongue firmly in cheek poem about my baking today for Silent One's new contest - hubby laughed so much when I read it to him:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2015 2:44:00 PM

A delightful and witty string of footles, Jan. Luckily I don't go mad on sweets! Hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/30/2015 3:27:00 AM

I won't say no to that:) Looking forward to it! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 6:35:00 PM

Oh ... but maybe I could twist your arm to have a slice of cake at Fontanella:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2015 11:24:00 PM

I am curious now if there are "Headles" Yes its late, thus silly hour!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 1:11:00 AM

lol Arthur - all this stuff comes from my head so I guess so lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/28/2015 11:23:00 PM

If you didn't have a hubby, on my I better be quiet!!!! :) loved this! My kinda gal!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/29/2015 1:13:00 AM

Well then I can come visit and me and him can have cake and drinks!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2015 1:10:00 AM

LOL I do have a hubby and he loves cake:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2015 3:57:00 PM

you are so good at making stories out of footles, Jan! GREAT picture to inspire this set!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2015 4:00:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I have actually just iced a chocolate cake I had made and frozen ... we are tucking into it now i have just had a tiny slice:-) I make the cake every year for hubby and son's birthdays - just a betty crocker one then cover it with dark chocolate mmmmmm :-) Hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 8/27/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thanks for visiting my poem today. This is a FANTASTIC F U N write ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2015 1:45:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed:-)hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/27/2015 8:07:00 AM

So fun this one.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2015 1:44:00 PM

Thanks Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 8/27/2015 4:12:00 AM

Sweet Jan still the funny one!! but i like the end though!!! thanks for greeting me in my birthday!! I wasn't on soup cause so busy!!! thanks much!! so appreciate it..~Olive Eloisa =')

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2015 1:44:00 PM

I know you've been busy Olive I hope you had a super time:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2015 8:26:00 PM

Where's mine? I pine. None left. Bereft. Tummy. Empty. calorifically written, Jan. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2015 1:43:00 PM

LOL Mr Viv I have just got a home made chocolate cake out of the freezer just covered it with plain chocolate mmmm:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/26/2015 6:17:00 PM

this is adorable, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/27/2015 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2015 3:33:00 PM

you just got me all the way, jan...supperb footles!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2015 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Theresa Cw

Date: 8/26/2015 1:26:00 PM

Ha ha ha, seems like everyone wants a piece of your tasty cakes Jan, so I won't ask for a piece for I'm trying to lose some extra unwanted pounds. Nice food footle,hugs Theresa

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2015 1:34:00 PM

I need to put some weight on maybe guzzling some cake would be good lol - of course I would willingly share it though lol - love the new avatar Theresa:-)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2015 1:00:00 PM

cut three...for me

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2015 1:05:00 PM

Sorry Tim - all mine .... divine:-) will bake more lol:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/26/2015 12:51:00 PM

LOL....Dear dear dear....Bake the cake...AND GIVE IT TO ME!!! Hugs....

Jan Allison
Date: 8/26/2015 12:55:00 PM

I adore cake Eileen have to admit I have never done this on my own but my best mate Jenny and i used to buy a black forest gateau and a bottle of Cointreau a bottle of lemonade and have a girly feast lol - gosh that is going back to when I was about 18 lol ... more years ago than I care to remember and I'm almost tea total now.... but I still love cake lol:-) hugs jan xx