Greaze

my grandpa's bike needs greasing, so do his knees he hates his bike and wants to walk with the breeze

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Date: 4/11/2013 10:47:00 AM

Ebrahim, Congratulations with your winning poem ;-) Have yourself a nice day. Always & Forever*PD

Date: 4/8/2013 2:19:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Ebrahim Sharifat
Date: 4/10/2013 8:52:00 AM

thank you dear Sara

Date: 4/8/2013 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

Ebrahim Sharifat
Date: 4/10/2013 8:53:00 AM

thank you dear Joyce for reading.

Date: 4/8/2013 8:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place xx

Ebrahim Sharifat
Date: 4/10/2013 8:54:00 AM

thanks so much Mandy :)

Date: 3/22/2013 6:55:00 PM

I really enjoy this, Ebrahim. I'm wising you good luck in the contest!

Ebrahim Sharifat
Date: 3/28/2013 5:27:00 PM

thanks dear friend, i'm glad you enjoyed it. thank you for your kind comment :)

Date: 3/20/2013 3:24:00 PM

oh, this is really cute!!! ME LIKES.

Ebrahim Sharifat
Date: 3/28/2013 5:28:00 PM

thank you, im glad you liked it :)