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Greatness

Everyday I lay awake, Wishing I would just forget, All the pain and suffering, That came and went, Never did I ever know, People stood beside me, Loving me and caring for me, Shall I become something amazing, Always scared or ever known, Words that I can't explain meaning, Keep on writing, don't stop Everything is wrong, but I wont stop

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Date: 1/7/2017 8:09:00 PM
When things go wrong don't stop, those at the top have been there too! Keep on writing on the Supportive Soup site. Best wishes and happy New Year. Rainbow.
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Katheryn Moore
Date: 1/7/2017 10:56:00 PM
Thank you. I will continue to write and I to love this site and your comments, they make my day :)
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Rainbow Promise
Date: 1/7/2017 8:12:00 PM
P.S. This seems to be freely written and flows well. ??
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Rainbow Promise
Date: 1/7/2017 8:11:00 PM
P.S. This seems to be freely written and flows well. ??
Date: 1/1/2017 4:38:00 PM
I really appreciate your positive approach. Really, I have this issue, either to continue or stop writing because everything sometimes seems wrong.
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Katheryn Moore
Date: 1/7/2017 11:00:00 PM
Me too. This was one of my main topics of the poem, another was the stress of having to uphold a certain image. I'm a writer for a company and everyday they give me a topic to write about and they expect a certain way I write it. It's either not to there standards or needs work. Everyday I go threw this process and even after I change it, they edit it before it gets published. This poem is very important to me. Thank you for your comment :)

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