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Greatest of Loves

With each morning hug, nighttime releases gentle sighs Floating upon warm breezes are their whispered replies It’s a classical type of love that what we share Elizabeth Browning couldn't count the ways we care A romantic beautiful story telling how we take the lead Blending so well together we’re a rare dying breed See Romeo and Juliet’s love met an untimely death Unable to be revived not even with love’s breath Traveling through time and space, our love will endure Inside each of those seconds our motives being pure Never knowing absolute happiness until I found you We will shape futures pages with this undying love so true 7/6/2020

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John Hamilton

Date: 7/9/2020 6:04:00 PM

This is a wonderful write Brenda, how it should feel, congrats on a top win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/10/2020 9:52:00 AM

Thank you John! I’m am waiting to experience that type of love! I know it’s out there and I plan on having it lol!;)

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/8/2020 7:03:00 PM

Intimately well-penned, Brenda, breathless expressions that weaved a beautiful tapestry of soulful passion, my compliments for your fine TOP win at 1st Place -- Aloha~@William

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/10/2020 9:50:00 AM

William thank you so very much! Your words are greatly appreciated you are too kind!;)

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/8/2020 2:01:00 PM

Congratulations dear Brenda. This is the type of a passionate poem that I thirst. The way you say....Elizabeth Barret couldn't count the ways...mesmerizing dear Brenda! A fave!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 2:12:00 PM

Thank you I am so happy do many like it! I enjoyed writing! It I was to be a collab with a friend of mine on a another site! We will see if he follows through with his part!;)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2020 11:57:00 AM

References to the classics in a classic poem, my friend. So many wonderful phrases bright with imagery - "inside each of those seconds," "shape future pages," "nighttime releases gentle sighs." So fun to share the podium with you. Congratulations on your first place win! Blessings and hugs!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 2:09:00 PM

Sam thank you! As I told John I babes used reference to literature before but it just seemed to fit this time! I’m so happy you enjoyed it!;)

John Watt

Date: 7/8/2020 10:47:00 AM

Brenda, I enjoyed reading your winsome tale of love today, with such a positive vibe. I liked your literary references to Browning and Shakespeare adding historical depth to your words. Simply beautiful. Congratulations on your top win ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 2:07:00 PM

Thank you so much John! And yes this was the first time I had used any kind of reference to literature history! But it just seemed to fit into the poem!;)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/8/2020 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Did you say, your Anniversary was on July 4?????? If yes, hope you had a great day. Enjoy your win and day..........

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much! But no I am single not married so no anniversary ! Thx anyway:)

Gary Radice

Date: 7/8/2020 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win Brenda Cheers :) Gary

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 8:18:00 AM

Thank so much!;)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 7/8/2020 7:43:00 AM

The sweetest love story dear Brenda, many congrats on your top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 8:02:00 AM

And thank you so very much!;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/8/2020 7:08:00 AM

BIG congrats on your TOP win Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 8:01:00 AM

Haha! Thank you Vijay!;)

Patri Venkata Ramana

Date: 7/8/2020 6:53:00 AM

Congrats on your top win!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 8:00:00 AM

Thank you so much!;)

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/8/2020 6:47:00 AM

A beautiful and soothing tale of love Brenda. Congratulations on your win! :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 10:32:00 AM

Thank you so much!;)

Rick Still

Date: 7/8/2020 2:02:00 AM

Brenda, this is beautiful and I really connect with it

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/8/2020 7:59:00 AM

Ahh I am so glad you can! And I appreciate your lovely comment!;)

Mark Koplin

Date: 7/6/2020 3:15:00 PM

Very beautiful!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 4:40:00 PM

Thank you so much Mark!;)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/6/2020 11:41:00 AM

So much passion in this ode to undying true love..you write love verses beautifully, Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 11:49:00 AM

Ahh thank you Vijay! I like to think I’ve had plenty of time to think on how it should truly be! Set ones sight high and never settle!;)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/6/2020 11:34:00 AM

You speak of a strong love, and an even stronger spirit. You have written a weighted poem of love and endurance, may you continue to write like this for a very long time, Thank you Brenda for sharing, have a blessed day, hugs xo

Brenda Chiri
Date: 7/6/2020 11:48:00 AM

Pixie thank you so very much! Your words of encouragement are so welcomed!;)