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Greatest Fear

To ride the sea is a blessing and a curse huddle of fleeting gulls dart from nowhere lending frolic to breakers, they traverse in mystic laps with hued bubbles so rare. Toes swivel a distance and I immerse from ripples of causeway, beyond compare; Yet once, twice bold torrent did choke my lungs Sinking into deep foam, into waves’ tongues. I awake on bed of grass by the shore, and from a hazy terrain, chirps enthrall ridding my anxious glides of waters' roar... but the fear-thrill of cruising makes me stall as the bash of rapids pounds on heart’s core; O dread, dread of drowning grips my breaths whole. And though tingle of far crests still delights I’d rather stroll on coastlines without fright. Your Greatest Fear Contest for Lewis Raynes - True story 10/1/2016

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Date: 1/8/2017 5:34:00 AM
Most poetic way of drowning I've ever read. Great poem, Nette. I like the Ottava rima style. You do it justice w/this marvelous, delightful poem. Excellent write. Love always to you.
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:24:00 AM
Wonderfully written Nette. I think most people have a healthy fear of drowning. It's a good thing as long as it doesn't turn in to a phobia.
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Date: 10/2/2016 7:59:00 PM
Hi Nette, You described your fear in a poetic fashion. I enjoyed the read very much. I must say we "share" the same fear. Although I couldn't have penned it quite like this. Well done. I wish you the best luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/2/2016 9:50:00 AM
This depicts great imagery. I enjoy the read.........A.M.
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Date: 10/1/2016 4:27:00 PM
Your stirring poem is a force to reckon with! No long cruises for me as well.
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Date: 10/1/2016 2:03:00 PM
- Well described in a wonderful poem, Nette - Happy weekend :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/1/2016 1:41:00 PM
Nette, I am loving this poem a lot. .well done with a difficult form~
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:12:00 AM
Leave me at the shallow end, best wishes Nette...
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