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Great Wave

Deep breath: Great wave rolling in

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/17/2010 7:52:00 AM

this is concise yet can't help but hold my breath as well! enjoyed this, Audrey :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/2/2010 5:20:00 AM

Love these epigrams. Great job Audrey! In the moment. -Robert

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/29/2009 1:58:00 PM

A very precise definition ... and yet snug in sweet poetics

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2009 4:20:00 PM

Great six word write. Should do well in the contest if entered. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2009 3:06:00 AM

Excellent Epigram Audrey >> James

Sheol Moribund

Date: 12/26/2009 12:57:00 PM

Dear Audrey: I like this poem...alot!!! One really needs to take a Deep Breath, in order to survive the many great waves in our lifes. Only the best: Sheol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2009 6:48:00 AM

Well contest winners have been posted.. we did not win if this was your entry ..neither did my Disenchanted .. which I thought was pretty good... onto the next contest challenge... this is the kind of poetry I so enjoy ..anything with water and denotes the beach and free sun and sky and sand.. I am so there... hope your Christmas Day was great with best wishes for Happy New Year.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..

Constance La France

Date: 12/23/2009 9:46:00 PM

splendid visual you create for us... and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/23/2009 7:43:00 PM

And kind of a mystery story! maybe a deep breath won't be enough. Good luck with this contest!

Moonbee Canady

Date: 12/23/2009 7:04:00 PM

Just Stopped by to read some marvelous Poetry ... This One is both dramatic and Fun-Time ... (Oh how I love the Water - smile ... Your Poet Friend ... MoonBee

Marty Owens

Date: 12/23/2009 9:14:00 AM

Love this one too Audrey...Marty

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/23/2009 7:25:00 AM

Why write a paragraph when only six words tells all... Well done Audrey....God Bless....Taz

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/23/2009 6:47:00 AM

yes breath..the true gift of life on so many levels. Light & Love and thanks for reading my works!

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/23/2009 6:47:00 AM

Tells a story in so few words...exception job you have done here Audrey! Thanks so much for sharing and for your taking the time to read my writes! Many thanks too for your kind comments and words of encouragement are deeply appreciated! Wishing you and yours a Blessed Christmas and Joyous New Year! Have a wonderful day~Mary