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Grazing Stallion

Dark-colored prince in his prime Strolls amidst summer heralds As he masticates Thrill takes me away His streamline hairs curve downward As they drench in nature's touch Sharp dark eyes dart in degrees Amidst green grasses For Carol Brown's contest: ‘A horse story’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/30/2011 6:11:00 PM
Hi Osita, another lovely piece, picturesque and sublime. Well done!
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Date: 7/29/2011 10:14:00 AM
joseph, I can find no more poems of yours I have not commented to already. So I just came b ack to this lovely one that I really like. HOpe you create more and more beatiful ones like this. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/28/2011 1:40:00 PM
Joseph, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:25:00 PM
I liked the nice picture you create with this little poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joe. Excellent piece. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:43:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Joseph
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:53:00 PM
Congrats Joseph on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. Stallions are my very favs .. so strong and regal ..
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:02:00 PM
great job in contest Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/4/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this win to you in the contest of p.d., Joseph
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Date: 6/4/2011 9:15:00 AM
Horses are such beautiful animals, Joseph, and you describe this one so well. Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:23:00 AM
Congrats Joseph on another awesome win for another awesome write and entry into the contest luv.. enjoy..wow..
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Date: 6/4/2011 6:21:00 AM
congrats on this exceptional win. cory
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Date: 6/4/2011 4:12:00 AM
how vivid can this get and what great use of the form, joseph!! winning;s best to you.. i likey this ! :) huggggs, nette
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Date: 6/3/2011 10:00:00 PM
ooooh, that last part, very cool to picture in the green grasses! Great entry.
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:24:00 AM
well done, i tweeted this (Mediapope)
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