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Gray Sky Falls

Paralyzed sunshine of the day, gray kissed skyscrapers in faint Blurry dance stuck in the air as the dew pervades some occlusions Day sketched gloom in beauty behind the droplets of breezy nimbus

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 3:00:00 PM

Yanny, a wonderful sijo... a very deep poem..the ending image goes well with the title...xox~PD

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/6/2013 5:01:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely poem Linda :D - hug, yanny

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2013 11:47:00 PM

So elegant your words, sweet Yanny!!

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/22/2013 4:43:00 PM

Hello Andrea :D, glad too see you :D, wishing you a great day :D

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 1/21/2013 4:04:00 PM

elegant like the line: Blurry dance stuck in the air

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/21/2013 4:13:00 PM

Thank you Victoria, i missed you too :D, thank you for your visit it's really a pleasure to see you around :D - hug, yanny

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/21/2013 12:58:00 PM

Very nice... always nice to return to the Soup and read work that stands tall like this piece.. luv n hugs Michael

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/21/2013 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Michael :D, missing you too in here :D have a wonderful day :D - hug, yanny

Husna Mirza

Date: 1/18/2013 7:27:00 AM

Nice! :D

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 1/18/2013 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Husna :)