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Gray Blue Sky

On a lonely hill Stands a lonely house Under a gray blue sky. An empty shell Of what used to be A reminder of days Gone by. It's walls once housed A family with love It's roof kept them Safe and dry. It's windows shown With the bright morning sun As they watched the world go by. If ever you pass this lonely house Stop a minute and think Of all the lives and all the love That's passed through this lonely place. And remember with awe How life must have been Under a gray blue sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/10/2009 7:03:00 PM
an overcast poem from jojo, cool!!!
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Date: 4/4/2009 11:32:00 AM
this is excellent, Josette! your imagery... the rhymes and the flow ... i love everything about this writing! and love the title too :) ~ Arany
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Date: 4/4/2009 8:14:00 AM
Beautiful words and imagery. It flows.
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