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Gray

Gray! May define a boring day A life encircled by smoke When dreams are so far away And eyes was always broke Gray! I have a story to say About a guy whom to heaven and hell in between Head suffer from purgatory's sway The angels and demons within Gray! Gone astray Touched a gun loaded with silver bean He'll choose another color when journey If given a chance to ride, another lifetime machine 1-13-2016 Mysterious Aries

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Date: 7/14/2016 5:46:00 PM
Very nice Frederick. A very thought filled piece. Sometimes when one's life feels empty you could say it is gray. Then when they find something to give meaning to their life the sun comes and the grayness lifts and all is colorful and beautiful. A fine piece my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/14/2016 1:47:00 AM
Hi Frederick, I enjoyed reading this tonight. It flowed in rhyme and content.You expressed some raw emotions. It was so poetic. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/14/2016 12:04:00 AM
Wonderful my friend!
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Date: 7/13/2016 11:38:00 PM
Nice job. I wonder what our lives would be like if we chose another direction? -JT
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