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Gravity

grounded by Father. . . His willful kids keep trying to break nature's laws

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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 10/6/2016 9:29:00 PM

I'm always looking for great examples of Haikus....and here's one right here! Great job with this Andrea! MC

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:47:00 AM

you are amazing

John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 4:36:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 8:09:00 PM

Great Andrea, :) good to see this unique take on the contest on the winners list :) awesome girl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/9/2014 7:52:00 PM

Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 7/9/2014 3:07:00 AM

Nicely done. Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:21:00 PM

Andrea, love the thought, congrats on the haiku...PD

Joseph May

Date: 7/8/2014 10:01:00 PM

Very clever..congrats on the win Andrea

Greg Hoffman

Date: 7/8/2014 9:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this poem,well done

David Mohn

Date: 7/8/2014 8:59:00 PM

darn kids :) love your take on this Andrea...this contest was loaded with great ones, like this

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:38:00 PM

Girl, You don't even acknowledge that there is a box.. Love it!.. congrats on a great win.. Arlene

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:43:00 PM

I like this, Andrea...One of my favorites so far. There are many really good poems in this contest. Congratulations.

Theresa Stephens

Date: 7/8/2014 5:31:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Gravity indeed!. Congrats on your insightful win, All the best Theresa xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/8/2014 12:45:00 AM

Well penned Andrea! He creates n we tend to destroy nature,, true,, when wud we learn discipline ? congrats on big win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:29:00 AM

Nice references to the approach of the theme, Andrea. congrats on the win

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/8/2014 12:25:00 AM

Just following up on my earlier comment below - congratulations, Andrea, on a great win!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2014 2:23:00 PM

Very skillfully written; clear reference to the Creator and humanity. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 10:22:00 AM

Back for another read...with congratulations!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/5/2014 6:53:00 AM

Excellent, witty wirte! Love it, Andrea!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/29/2014 2:37:00 PM

love this clever one, my friend

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/28/2014 9:34:00 PM

Grey area between the lines. We stretch the truth that so confines.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/25/2014 5:17:00 PM

this really true however was this the story of the one who discovered gravity.. :D? anyhow it intrigues me.. :) nice nice one... :) GBU

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2014 7:33:00 AM

They/we have broken nature in the process. We now live in a Humpty Dumpty world that only the King can put back together again.

Darren Watson

Date: 5/24/2014 8:22:00 PM

I hope it was family law and not THE LAW . Delightful.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2014 11:37:00 PM

It was the Law of GRAVITY!!!!

Joseph May

Date: 5/24/2014 9:43:00 AM

Very clever write Andrea...enjoyed