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Gravity

The dark depth of space a blue orb ahead spinning two eyes caught in awe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2014 7:54:00 PM
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Ooh mesmorizing :) well done :)
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Date: 7/8/2014 11:20:00 PM
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nice win...PD
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/8/2014 8:34:00 PM
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beautiful, Frederic! congrats on a great win my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:06:00 PM
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Thank you Arlene for reading and yur kindness
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Faye Gibson
Date: 7/8/2014 5:40:00 PM
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Gorgeous, Frederick. So many good ones in this contest! Congratulations.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:07:00 PM
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Thank you Faye for reading and for your kindness
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/8/2014 3:46:00 PM
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I like how you had this with the eyes starting at it, for they are not there yet! Congrats.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:09:00 PM
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thank you my dancing and poetic friend
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2014 12:41:00 AM
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Magnificent write Frederic ! Congrats on big win!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:10:00 PM
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thank you Dr Upma for your kindness
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/8/2014 12:26:00 AM
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MeANINGFUL AND DEEP TAKE, frederic. congrats on the win
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:11:00 PM
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thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
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Skat A
Date: 7/7/2014 9:14:00 PM
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Frederic, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:11:00 PM
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thank you Skat
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/25/2014 6:11:00 PM
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This caught my eye, Frederic! deep and enjoyable haiku. cu // paul
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/9/2014 3:12:00 PM
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thank you again Paul for your kindness
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/8/2014 10:13:00 AM
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...and congratulations on your win!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/25/2014 6:26:00 PM
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thank you Paul for reading and your kind response
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Skat A
Date: 5/22/2014 12:02:00 AM
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:) SKAT
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/22/2014 8:58:00 AM
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thank you Skat
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Nathan D.
Date: 5/21/2014 11:55:00 AM
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great haiku
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/22/2014 8:59:00 AM
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thank you Nathan

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