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Gravity

As a helium balloon floated up in the sky one day Gravity told him he'd soon be coming down The balloon thought up was the only way On his way to the great unknown He was hoping he'd reach the stars But he didn't get that far Suddenly gravity began tugging at him And soon helium lost his vigor and vim He began slowly coming down Gravity held him till he reached the ground

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/26/2013 2:46:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:40:00 PM
Joseph,. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:04:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Joseph
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Date: 10/17/2013 10:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for your personifying the interaction with gravity, enjoyed reading it. Good imagery. Thanks much for entering my contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 10/19/2013 9:53:00 AM
Thank you for my placement Sheri
Date: 9/30/2013 4:53:00 AM
- A good write Joseph - well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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