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Below is the poem entitled gravity which was written by poet Joseph May. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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 As a helium balloon  floated up in the sky  one day
Gravity told him he'd soon be  coming  down
The balloon  thought up was the only way
On his way to the great unknown

 He was hoping he'd  reach the stars
But he didn't get that far
Suddenly gravity began tugging at him
And soon helium lost his vigor and vim
He began slowly coming down
Gravity held him till he reached the ground

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  1. Date: 10/26/2013 2:46:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win, well done! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 10:40:00 PM
    Joseph,. CONGRATULATIONS... always & forever~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/18/2013 5:04:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Joseph

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 10:50:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Thanks much for your personifying the interaction with gravity, enjoyed reading it. Good imagery. Thanks much for entering my contest.

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    Date: 10/19/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for my placement Sheri
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 4:53:00 AM
    - A good write Joseph - well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)