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Graveyard Girl

There's a girl in the graveyard that never seems to leave. She hangs like dust in the autumn air. She has beautiful flowers and tangles in her hair. When it seems she's right there, she's nowhere.

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Skat A

Date: 5/3/2015 10:03:00 PM

makes me wonder what keeps her spirit there either she's a free spirit or a trapped one, enjoyed this one, :) SKAT love

Sulakshana Bhattacharya

Date: 4/16/2015 2:29:00 PM

Ooo... Wow.. Your poem is so lucid that it seems you are telling a bed time story to little kids! It is so soft, simple, yet has an eery element.. Just like a cloudy moonlit night. It's so enigmatic that I feel like reading it again and again and again... It has that charm that draws me. Great pen Aurora! Did justice to your name! Enigma personified ! :)