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Gratitude

We pass by homeless on the street They make me grateful for the roof above my head Metatarsalgia in my feet makes me wince How lucky I am that I can still walk Although my feet hurt I’m thankful the tumors in them are benign How grateful I am not to worry how my money will be spent Because I have none Sure, my cholesterol is nearly 400 But I’m thankful that my heart still beats Age has blurred my vision Yet it’s a blessing to have eyes that still see most things And ears to hear Though people have to speak louder to me now How grateful I am to have a voice When there is someone who cares to listen A sense of humor is one of God’s greatest gifts Let's all show our appreciation *August 31, 2020 For Francine’s “Attitude of Gratitude” contest

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/9/2020 12:11:00 PM

Yes, such truth here, hon - love this uplifting write x

John Watt

Date: 10/5/2020 8:08:00 PM

This is the ultimate 'silver lining' poem and I love it. God bless you for your inspiring attitude of gratitude, Carolyn. Big congrats for your podium win. Hugs ~ John

Joanna Feltham

Date: 10/5/2020 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your poem. I am also very greatfull for my voice. X

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/4/2020 7:40:00 PM

congrats darling Carolyn on your second place win in my contest , thank you for entering

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/9/2020 1:29:00 PM

What a nice surprise, Francine! Thank you.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 9/29/2020 8:50:00 AM

I really love this write! We should all feel as grateful as you do. Much love, Angie

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/22/2020 6:48:00 AM

Very much so...love it!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/4/2020 1:48:00 PM

Age robs us of many things, but grumbling will get us nowhere; let's make the most of what we still have! Your meaningful poem shows the way forward! Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/2/2020 8:48:00 AM

God has given us all certain charms,he gave us very importantly the gift of logic and made each one of us unique - Glory to God. Lovely poem Carolyn - good luck in the contest. Love and hugs, Jennifer

Judy Ball

Date: 9/1/2020 8:12:00 AM

This one is going into my faves Carolyn. Wonderful. I have problems with my feet too but and grateful I can still walk and even run a little. My vision isn't that good either but I can still see. We all get old and succumb to aches and pans but we can still get around. Thank God for small miracles. God Bless, JB

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/1/2020 2:18:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. I think we just become more grateful for the little things as we get older.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2020 7:29:00 AM

You certainly are a tonic with your humourous outlook Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/1/2020 5:21:00 AM

WOW! This is a stunning portrait my friend, on how to be grateful despite all the normal worries of life. Many can relate to your echoes on aging and those who are less fortunate. Superb sentiments, Carolyn: ..How grateful I am to have a voice When there is someone who cares to listen...true for us all. I am saving this in my FAVES.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 9/1/2020 2:30:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Getting older is easier if you have a sense of humor.