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Grasses Unseen

The lazy river drifts on by Its waters deep deep green Running shallow lazily In search of grasses unseen No star far enough to satisfy A hungry soul in search. Ocean's depths can't hold the restless. A lonesome desire for mirth Pacing back and forth between Microscope, seas, and stars. The hyper human examines; Feeling trapped behind bars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/10/2015 6:28:00 PM
SARA, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:48:00 AM
Sara thanks for comments, it was personal and now thanks to Hormone therapy and Radiotherapy 8 years have flown. The expeience helped me to publish a book of poetry and raise £2,500 for the Urology Dept. at the local hospital. I believe that prostate cancer is often found but often not the cause of death. I have read a number of your postings and trule admire how much thoought you can provoke with a few words, abe win a contest. Big smile please Mike
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:41:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Sara! Exquisite work!
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Date: 8/9/2015 5:23:00 PM
what the heck? I just commented on this one and now my comment is gone!! I am now seeing that you won the contest. BIG congrats, Sara. Well deserved.
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