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While transient clouds ripple in streaks Below a heap of perfumed blooms prances , While fireflies wheel through evening, mellow… Just then, rainfall blows Like a funerary gush of tears Damping my cheeks, blotting night’s glint, As I ,in a long sojourn of ambivalence Writhe again inside--- heart rousing a storm. ~ How in low flicker, time wobbles on… The jasmines gone before I could hold them- Ignoring such charm as they brush my skin. ~ Maybe this fault of gloom overcomes me.. I fail to see this life, this timely presence . I don't know why … My breath feels the dying and the low: Till fireflies circle my body with radiance Awakening a flame to grasp this moment, To open these eyes and relish A pure delight of what is unfurling NOW. 1.03.2017 Form C : Broken Wings Contest
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Date: 1/9/2017 7:40:00 PM
Great example of carpe diem, nette. I enjoyed it. Congrats.
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Date: 1/9/2017 2:51:00 PM
Coming back with congrats.
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:09:00 AM
I love the form you chose! Distraction of the here and now. Congrats, Nette!
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Date: 1/9/2017 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette, with this well expressed poem. // Barry
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Date: 1/9/2017 6:18:00 AM
What a beautiful way of expression, Nette. Outstanding! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/4/2017 8:25:00 PM
As I was told by explorer Will Steiger upon reading my tribute poem 'you are aware, James' ...your eyes are open Nette...a joy to hear you exclaim! jim
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Date: 1/4/2017 6:57:00 AM
A beautiful "ode to the eternal present moment".
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Date: 1/3/2017 3:51:00 PM
Very creative and expressive work..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Don't let the gloom linger brush it away..Thanks for all the comments..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2017 3:04:00 PM
is it truly the now or only the presence of focus? to see the present as it is or as perceived, understanding that both may be correct, for even a passing thought is already in the past, to focus, to absorb, to feel, to be, all these things give reason for just being, like lilies of the field that neither sow or reap..my first thought after reading this thought provoking poem dear poet
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Date: 1/3/2017 2:04:00 PM
Always a good idea to live in the now, nette. Like the old cliche, stop to smell the roses. Lovely poem:)
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Date: 1/3/2017 2:03:00 PM
Lovely imagery, nette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/3/2017 1:55:00 PM
- A pure delight to read this beautiful poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2017 1:41:00 PM
Every time I read your poetry ..Im in awe..dear Nette..Indeed a fave.Happy New Year sweetie.
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Date: 1/3/2017 1:10:00 PM
enjoyed stopping by to get a view of the present opportunity, as shown by your adept summation here Nette, hope your new years going well'
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