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Grasping the Wind

Trying to walk on water Trying to grasp the wind always so close but yet so faraway I'm at a loss My hopes and dreams are dwindling. My mind and heart are in turmoil my soul lonely battered and bruised I still have so much love to give But without love I cannot breath and find it hard to live. Peter Dome.copyright,2013.Dec.

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/28/2013 1:25:00 AM

Hi Peter: It will count for the right person.....when it is meant to happen it will. Keep seeking the beauty and stay hopeful. Thanks for your kind comments.

Peter Dome
Date: 12/28/2013 5:53:00 AM

What a lovely inspiring comment. Thank you so much. Take good care. Warm best wishes. Pete.

Kelly Crenshaw

Date: 12/27/2013 9:02:00 PM

Real. Well done

Peter Dome
Date: 12/28/2013 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much Kelly. Much appreciated. Take care. Best wishes. Pete.

Wendy Meyer

Date: 12/27/2013 9:56:00 AM

expressively sad.. words are altogether artistically beautiful and simple. You'll find it soon, the love, I hope soon enough, my friend. ~~ Wendy

Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2013 10:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Wendy for your kind words. Much appreciated. take good care, warm best wishes. Pete.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/27/2013 9:05:00 AM

I'm sitting here wondering just what to say. This is so sad, yet so beautiful. I can relate to this, life can be so gray, and there is often so little you can do but just wait, endure and hope. BG

Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2013 9:41:00 AM

Thank you so much friend. I really appreciate your kindness as always. Seems being a romantic and. a good heart are not enough anymore. I'm not in to quick flings, I need more I need to have feelings. Trouble is that's what it's like today. I rather save myself for that one special person. It really makes me disillusioned. where have morals and self respect gone. I do hope you get what your hoping for and have better luck than me. take care best wishes thank you. Pete.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/27/2013 6:27:00 AM

love a simple four letter word with such power Peter excellent poem Shadow x smile hug

Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2013 8:45:00 AM

Hi Shadow, always nice to hear from you. Some people seem to have it all, but don't appreciate what they have. Having a good heart and being a romantic, does't seem to count much these days.Thank you for your kind words. take care, best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/27/2013 5:58:00 AM

- A touching and sad poem Peter - New year ....with new possibilities, hope the year will give you what you are looking for! - oxox // Anne-Lise:)

Peter Dome
Date: 12/27/2013 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne Lise, Your so kind.. Like you say, who knows what lays ahead. Take care, warm best wishes. Pete. X.