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Grape Soda

My seatmate on the subway Started taking out his lunch, Pushing dreadlocks back and headphones As his sandwich he did munch. In his right hand was a soda, Flavored grape, so said the can. (By the way, on food and drink in subways There exists a ban.) I was sitting on his right as he Quite deftly popped the top And although the train was lurching, Well, he never spilled a drop. Which was fortunate for me because My pants and top were white And some purple soda speckles Would have spoiled my day and night. But we shouldn’t judge our neighbors Or expect them to fulfill Every purple drink’s desire, Which is itching for a spill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/7/2014 10:54:00 PM
Loved this one, no sour grapes here!!!!
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Date: 6/7/2014 5:15:00 PM
LOL, love your sense of humour - and so glad you didn't get splattered. I once opened a bottle of fizzy water on a train and sprayed an already grumpy lady - very embarrassing, LOL
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Date: 6/6/2014 10:04:00 PM
oh, the title made me want to read this one and I was NOT disappointed. Great portrait you painted of this guy and his grape soda and your train ride!!
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Date: 6/6/2014 3:16:00 PM
What a fun little poem Ilene...I drink a can of Pepsi on the train each night on the way to work.
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