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Grape Haiku

frozen on the vine cryogenic flavored host a time released smile frozen on the vine ice glistening in the sun grapes hold on tight harvest time has come necter trapped in purple orbs till glasses are raised Freddie's Grape Haiku Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Donna Jones
Date: 5/3/2013 3:38:00 PM
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Clink.....:-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2013 3:43:00 PM
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cheers
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2013 3:32:00 AM
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- Really enjoyable to read your work, lovely written Richard.- I take a glass with you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2013 7:32:00 AM
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Sounds good, they make lovely ice wine here in the Okanagan.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2013 3:33:00 AM
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* LUCK IN CONTEST !!!!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 5/2/2013 11:41:00 PM
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Makes me wanna go have a glass of mulled wine right now... MMM! I loved the purple orb description. It's a bit of a dramatic way to simply to say a grape, but yet it makes the grape feel like so much more. Good luck!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2013 7:33:00 AM
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The grape truly is so much more. Thanks for adding your flavor to my glass Timothy.
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Matthew Anish
Date: 5/2/2013 9:50:00 PM
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Your poem made me thirsty - nice job! Peace and blessings Matthew Anish
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2013 10:00:00 PM
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Thanks Matthew
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Judy Konos
Date: 5/2/2013 8:48:00 PM
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You did it Richard...WOW WEE
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2013 9:43:00 PM
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Thanks Judy!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/2/2013 7:28:00 PM
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Lovely...I liked the "nectar trapped in purple orbs" line.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2013 7:50:00 PM
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Thanks, I'm not much of a Haiku guy but I gave it a shot.
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Colleen Bono
Date: 5/2/2013 6:52:00 PM
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all i can say is SWEET.and again first one to view and comment on.good night.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2013 6:55:00 PM
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literly finished it seconds ago *lol*

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