Granola

Time t'was the ol' Cap'n for me Them Crunchberries coated my teeth Once I came to my senses Granola's pretenses hugged me to firm grounding beneath. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ahoy there! (for PD's 'test)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/13/2011 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Nancy. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/9/2011 9:52:00 PM

Congrats Nancy with this great win for Granola luv... enjoy a yummy and healthy treat luv..

John Freeman

Date: 10/9/2011 12:03:00 PM

To each his own Nancy. Hate this one Smile! Congrats on your worthy Limerick. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2011 4:17:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Nancy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2011 1:30:00 AM

haha. you went from sweet to more grounded. You are all "growed up" now, Nancy! (wish I could do that) Congrats on your win with this cute poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/9/2011 12:26:00 AM

DEAR , NANCY, CONGRATULATIONS! ;-) THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST, WITH YOUR FUNNY cereal LIMERICK,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Kash Poet

Date: 9/30/2011 2:49:00 PM

Very nice Limerick .Enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/29/2011 8:05:00 PM

who can forget Captain Crunch Nancy and who could pen such a terrific entry but u luv.. good luck in the contest... feeling that granola twinge now..