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Grandpa Jogs

grandpa jogs he can’t seem to outrun his age he really tries he’s good at finding new wrinkles

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Date: 2/23/2014 4:07:00 PM
With the smile that this puts on my face I would have thought it a senryu? Which ever way, what a great read, what a great write.
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Charles Henderson
Date: 2/23/2014 10:18:00 PM
Scott, I think you are probably right, about the Senryu.
Date: 1/24/2014 9:37:00 PM
Like Cyndi, I especially loved the first one too.
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:37:00 PM
Love these kind that are based on ideas instead of the way they are always saying to do haiku.
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Date: 12/31/2013 8:13:00 AM
LOVED the first haiku. Soup mail
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Date: 12/30/2013 9:16:00 AM
I know how grandpa feels but I can only go forward but not jogging..Enjoyed reading..Sara
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Date: 12/15/2013 9:01:00 AM
Haiku with a good humor, Charles
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