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Grandma

The fighting lulled for a moment We were waiting for grandma's comment "Oh my sons had fussed over their children" "Go to bed right now and read Mrs. Mildren" We were reading the buccaneers' tales Plundering ships,adventures in sails It was grandma's gift her own choice She sang, nature had gifted her with a fine voice She sang for us when pirates went to sleep In our dreams Mrs. Mildren's words creep She touched our hands we turned over in bed She kissed our heads moon eclipsed sun sneaked in red We came out of the room and she greeted "Hello boys" "O sure these two little imps would ride Rolls Royce" She is no more now she is sleeping in her grave She had hushed the stars her grandchildren are brave Contest Name : How You Make The Stars Hush Sponsor: Justin Bordner 7th March 2015

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Date: 3/14/2015 7:01:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 3/14/2015 2:19:00 PM
Hi Rajat, stopping back to congratulate you on your win. As I said before, this was such a wonderful tribute to your Grandma. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:24:00 AM
How lovely Rajat! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 3/13/2015 9:24:00 PM
Rajat, weee this one is so cute.. I can remember me and my grandma in these lines.. my grandma took care of me when am a baby 'til am near my grade school.. this poem touched me.. //olive eloisa
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Date: 3/13/2015 1:55:00 PM
Such love, so wonderfully told. I hope you read it to your grandchildren. Congratulations on your winning verse. Light & Love
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Date: 3/13/2015 4:10:00 AM
Rajat, how come I missed this? Tears came to my eyes when I reached the end. Incredibly sweet and touching tribute told in a light manner. Congratulations my friend. Hugs! :) Kim
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Date: 3/8/2015 8:45:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem, Rajat. I felt the love and and admiration for your Grandma through your words. A beautiful tribute, and I send best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:08:00 PM
rajat I like when you write this way. I think limericks kind of restrict you from saying all you want to say. this is very nice and I hope it makes the winners list.
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Date: 3/7/2015 2:51:00 PM
A great tribute to your grandmother..I enjoyed reading how she loved and played with her grandchildren..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2015 11:43:00 AM
:) Lovely picture of your grandmother, dear. She sees to be quite the lady. Thanks for the kind comment you left on Jack's poem. Hope all is well. hugs
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