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Grandma

Tears and rain, sit upon my eyelashes. One shows my pain, one washes it away. The grey clouds are one with my breaking heart. Shedding their pain in tune with my souls cry To accept that Grandma is leaving me, is easier to say than to live through. Each slowing beat of her heart pierces me. My second mom, my best friend, dying now. Her grace and wisdom will stay with me still. I am, today, the woman she molded. Touching so many, giving of herself. Angel on earth, soon to be going home.
For "Tetractys" contest Hosted by Jared Pickett Placement: Honorable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/6/2010 10:05:00 PM
Congratulations with this fine poem about your grandma. She must have been so special to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:18:00 AM
This one should have been one of the top winning poems.........just beautifully written. (My humble opinion) :)
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Jared Picket's contest "Tetractys". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations Paula in your success in Jared's Contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:32:00 PM
Congrats on the HM win, Paula
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Date: 8/4/2010 6:17:00 PM
Congrats Paula on your HM in Jared's contest with this wonderful write .. an awesome win.. an amazing entry my friend.. enjoy your honor..with luv..
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Date: 7/28/2010 12:52:00 AM
Form was superb. Content was even better. I was pulled into the emotions of losing my own grandmother quit against my will. A testament to the strength of the authors words. On a final note, it's a pleasure to see soupers challenge themselves with some of the more difficult forms especially when it bears the fruit of this endeavor. Scott...
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Date: 7/26/2010 10:19:00 PM
As a grandma, I can only hope my grandson loves me as much. I love this write. BG
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