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Granduncle Rey was inimitable… uncommon. He could make a story out of a passing wind and have me crying, giggling like an imp-- this God-given knack could spin yarns of myth that even my siblings rasp with bulging eyes , mouths wide as a crater, entranced from delicate plots soaked in mystery. Every trail climbed one step away from anticipation, but a story was a story, the larger the better… how could a pirate turn into a lizard or eve's starlight emerge as a queen? It didn’t matter what the tale was about, for between, “And then” and “Later on,” my ears were sucked deep into another world beyond my own knowing. Ambling on with this gifts of plums and gab, my adolescent days romped with our exchanges-- his warm commentaries of asteroids, pharaohs, and eternity made me a student of life, that when he breathed last this year...I was ripped only to build my own tales in life's center stage. ------------- Royal Relationships Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cook 5/15/2020

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Date: 5/17/2020 2:37:00 AM
Your awesome uncle inspired you to do many great things and one of them is your poetry which is rich and powerful - I'm sure he knows you write awesome poetry Nette and that now you 'Build my own tales in life's center stage' - congratulations on you win my friend. Love, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/16/2020 1:43:00 AM
It was great !! Every child should have the company of a great storyteller like Granduncle Ray :)
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Date: 5/15/2020 4:47:00 PM
What a wonderful influence your grand uncle was for you and Nette! Honor him with your poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful win! I so enjoyed reading this creation. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/15/2020 11:44:00 AM
This is such a touching story. I could remember my own uncle who had a short life but impacted mine for some time. Only memories remain. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win Nette!
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Date: 5/14/2020 10:54:00 PM
Great story...great line: Ambling on with this gifts of plums and gab. A lovely tribute to a standout Uncle!
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:56:00 PM
A sweet nostalgic story/poem of your Uncle! I'm sure we all had uncles like him.
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Date: 5/14/2020 1:49:00 PM
Such cherished memories last a lifetime--great write, Nette--all the best.
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:29:00 PM
These memories are what will get us through the other times; because all we have to do is close our eyes and breath. What a fantastic reminder of the wonderfulness of family ties! Good luck in the contest; this is beautifully penned Nette
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Date: 5/14/2020 10:46:00 AM
Beautiful Nette. Remembering loved ones and the joy you shared is a wonderful gift. Great job here. God Bless and stay well. JB
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Date: 5/14/2020 7:55:00 AM
What a wonderful piece. This a absolutely amazing. Great Job sure to be first.
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Date: 5/14/2020 6:49:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute Nette. Good luck. Tom
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