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Grand Canyon Portrait In Word

cascading water flows into braided rivers rush of white water palaces of sandstone towering monolith statuesque splendor weathered mosaics ancient cathedrals carved in stone natures masterpiece

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Debra Squyres

Date: 1/8/2013 6:39:00 PM

What a glorious picture you have painted with these words. I like it when words form scenes in my head. Nicely done series of Haiku !!

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/7/2012 6:40:00 PM

A masterpiece of haiku Lori, each of the three has a personality and adds to the splendor of this breathtaking place in the wilds of America. Beautiful!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/10/2012 9:52:00 PM

Wow! A nice vicarious experience I've got upon reading your haiku poem on Grand Canyon Portrait. Thanks for sharing!

Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/14/2012 6:11:00 AM

You and everyone else are getting so good at Haiku poems Lori .This is really good ,enjoyed it. Thank you for commenting on 'Jack'.Anne

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/12/2012 2:45:00 PM

I flew over the Grand Canyon twice on my way to Las Vegas. Even from an altitude of over thirty thousand feet, it looks wondrous. You have described it well in this fine work.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/12/2012 1:45:00 PM

Reminds me of my trip to the Grand Canyon - your poems capture it well. You utilized this Asian form very skillfully. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/10/2012 12:12:00 AM

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Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/9/2012 11:03:00 PM

Really really wonderful...like this one a lot. Best of luck if for any contest!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2012 9:31:00 PM

you are like a great wordsmith with this haiku set. Lovely!

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/9/2012 6:18:00 PM

wow great description in poetry,great write Lori

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/9/2012 1:11:00 PM

‡ I Had To Favour This Treasure, Because Its Just That Beautiful. ‡

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/9/2012 1:03:00 PM

‡ Picturesque Amid Splendid Beauty, Beautiful Lori * Seems As Though Nature & Its Counterpart Collaborated To Present This Wonderful Scene In Which Your Beauty Has Sooo Elegantly Shared With Our Hearts * A Lovely Photo Of Your Own Priceless Heart * My Luv, Rachel ‡