Grand

Such command and rank Sheltered on a rainy day Tough oak, known splendour

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2010 5:03:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku..Keep the creative pen flowing. I especially like the second line. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 4/4/2010 5:37:00 AM

There is trouble in the forest, there is trouble with the trees. For the Maples want more sunlight, and the Oaks ignores their pleas. Lyrics by the Rock Band, Rush from their track Trees > mighty Haiku Gareth >> James

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 4/3/2010 10:14:00 AM

Indeed oaks are. Very nice Haiku, Grand indeed. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, Caroline.

Mitch White

Date: 4/2/2010 11:58:00 AM

A mighty fine Haiku- as it pours outside my window

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/2/2010 11:27:00 AM

A marvelous tribute to the mighty oak, Gareth! Find some peace beneath this tree as you enjoy Easter. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/2/2010 11:06:00 AM

The mighty oak....that first line is brilliant!! :) Love this!...Carrie