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GRAMPS Grandad replaced father unknown to me: Gramps shaped my young mind instead of he. Mother loved him, went for holidays there; We took turns in his old rocking chair. Showed me the way to cut wood, turn a screw; Sang to me when I was sick with the ‘flu. Took me for rides in his fishing boat; Came to school in the rain carrying my forgotten coat. He died with pneumonia. We both were lost : Didn’t know what his raincoat trip would cost. But good folks like my gramps last forever My memories of him live on and wither never. . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . Written on 31 July 2011 for Carol Brown's competition

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Date: 8/2/2011 10:57:00 AM
Many congratulations, Sydney : )
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:18:00 AM
up close and personal, syd...heaps of congrats on your amazing award!! :) huggs!
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your tribute to your grandpa. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:59:00 PM
My congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, Sydney
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Date: 8/1/2011 8:42:00 PM
Another goosebumper... really nice write, Syd.
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Date: 8/1/2011 6:25:00 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 8/1/2011 5:50:00 PM
Congrats on your big win in Carol's contest.
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Date: 8/1/2011 4:54:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on the 2nd place win~~~~such a wonderful take~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my latest contest Sydney. It was very hard choosing the placements as I loved them all. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 2:56:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your second place win with this treasured poetry ...
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Date: 7/31/2011 4:32:00 PM
Oh, Syd, please don't blame yourself for the "raincoat trip." It seems like you had a wonderful grandfather who provided you with both skills and much love. Very touching entry for Carol's contest. Winning wishes headed your way. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:51:00 PM
That would be a memory not forgotten..He reads like a caring and kind man..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2011 1:15:00 PM
Nice tribute to your Grandad. Best wishes for Carol's contest. em :)
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