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Gracious Damsel

I wonder whether this is love or lust, If rain reigns in the day or dark night, Confused as I lay low without foresight, My soul sails through the sea of metal rust, Clean my lens and brush my hair just to adjust, Hoping to see my diamond shine so bright, This passion can`t be hidden but brought to light, as I look at the sky to know who to trust. Heaven smiles at me as my joy abound, This reminds one that shinning stars are few, Knowing that goodness and bliss will be found, I walk towards my pearl for the time is due, Her beauty and traits spin many heads around, For her benevolence you have to take a queue. *Valentine Poem*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/18/2014 9:27:00 AM
Beautifully done Valentines Day Poem! Congratulations.
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Date: 3/17/2014 4:11:00 AM
oH, one thing more, i've seen congratulatory remarks below. My belated sweet congratulations my dear friend. Cheers and biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/17/2014 4:08:00 AM
Awe! This is a very beautiful and sweet poem/dedication my very dear friend Olusegun. Embracing it & loving it so much. I'm deeply touched & honored for being one of the recipients of this very lovely dedication of yours. I'm so sorry for the late read but I'm keeping this in my fave treasure box if you don't mind? I love you as well. I'm so glad to read and hear from you again. Miss u my friend. More blessings! love much & biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/16/2014 6:15:00 PM
yes, I did read the poem, I love it, and placed it among my favorite poems. .. I'm so, happy to finally hear from you. Hugs..... luv....Linda
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Date: 3/16/2014 6:13:00 AM
A beautiful dedication. Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/15/2014 7:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your fine winning poem in Giorgio A.V. last contest, Olusegun. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2014 5:21:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win in the contest Impress me IV, olusegun
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Date: 3/14/2014 11:17:00 PM
Love the Sonnet, Olusegun... have a nice one...Linda
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Date: 3/14/2014 7:01:00 PM
Olusegun, Congrats on Giorgio's contest... SKAT
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